Sunday, August 15, 2010

The fan fiction of “Alice in wonderland” --final



The fan fiction of “Alice in wonderland”

Red queen
I am Iracebeth, the red queen of underland. Now I am in the outland of underland. My sister Mirana banished me. I still remember the last word she said to me “no one is to show you any kindness, or ever speak a word. You will not have a friend in the world”. Yes, this is my judgment. This is because the thing I did in underland is very bloody and cruel.
If everyone treat me like they treat my sister, I think I will also be a kindness girl, or maybe become a good queen in underland.
From I was born, everyone thought I am a stranger, because I had a bigger head than any other in my family. Even this, my parents loves me, they always said “Iracebeth, your head is the cleverest head in the world, the things in your head are treasure.” Even I knew this was just the word they wanted to make me happy, I still thanked them. The childhood in the life is unforgettable .
When I was 3 years old, my sister Mirana was born. In my eyes, she was the best girl in the world. She was beautiful, kindness, and happy. She always followed me and called me Racie. I love her, like she loves me. I was proud that I had such a good sister.
But something changed between my parents and I. they put all their attention on Mirana. I knew this is because she was the little sister. I didn’t care about that. I am the eldest; I will be the queen of underland.

White queen
I am Mirana, the white queen of underland. Now the life in underland is peace and quiet. That is because I banished my elder sister to the outland of underland. She did numbers of bloody things in underland. I had to banish her. Even I love her.
From I was born, I was a happy girl. Everyone loved me, my parents, the citizen of underland, even my sister Iracebeth. My sister is the best sister in the world: she often played with me, read story for me. In my eyes, she was the lovely sister, her big head was cute.
I know underland is the hereditary system. So from I was a little girl. I know Racie will be the queen of underland. I was sure she will be a good queen.

R
If that thing didn’t happen, I think I am still a good girl in underland. One day, I want to ask my father something. Unconsciously, I heard the talk between my parents.
“Martin, this is a cruel thing for her. Please don’t!! She is our daughter!!” my mom cried very loudly.
“Honey, we can’t have any sympathy. This is about the future of underland. This is about the fame of our family,” my father was very excited. I can’t understand what they said. But I know there will be a huge thing in our family.
“But……she just a child, our child…… ”
“Bella, I am sorry for this thing, but to poison Iracebeth is a thing which had decided. This is the destiny, the hereditary system. We must do that. We must make Mirana be the queen of underland. She is the right queen…… ”
“……”
I can’t believe what I heard. Are they my parents? Are they my family?? They are planning to kill me. They will poison me.
Hate. I hate them. I will escape first, and revenge. I left a letter to my sister, only three sentences “Mirana, I loved you. But from now on, I hate you. When I come back, you will die instead of me. ”
I said to myself, I will come back.

W
Racie was escaped. She heard our parents planning to kill her. Oh my god. I was shocked by this news. Even though we have hereditary system, they had not to kill her. She is our family, she is my lovely sister.
She left a letter to me. Just three sentence. I knew she hate me. If I was not born, she will be the queen. She will not be killed. She will have all the things she wants. Next time we see each other, we will be enemy……

R
I lived in a dark bog 10 years. In this ten year, I learnt a lot. I saved jabberwocky. With the help of jabberwocky, I am much stronger than before. I called myself red queen. I know, in marmoreal, my sister becomes the white queen; she succeeded to the throne upon our stupid parents.
As my forces extending, my plan revenge will come true.
Finally, I came back. I killed the king and queen- my parents. I killed lots of people I hated. But Mirana was escaped. I knew she will come back one day, but I will still be the winner!

W
I know this thing will happen one day, but not so fast. She killed back. I even didn’t see her, I escaped with the help of my hatter.
I know this is the fate. This is what I owe her.

R
I become a bloody queen in underland. I always say “off with their head”. I like red, I like blood.

w
My kindness sister has disappeared from the world. Racie become a bloody queen. She always kills the innocent people. Everyone in underland hates her. I know I must lead my champion to stop her.

Frabjous day……

R
I will die in this outland…… I am sick……I am lonely……if I was not such cruel, if I use the right way to get the throne back, now I will have a lot of people love me, than fear me. I miss my sister……

W
I heart a bad news- my sister is sick. She is going to die. I must go to see her for the last time……I must tell her, I love her.

Ending
Red queen fulfilled her dream. She saw her dearest sister before she died……

Fan Fiction Final - A walk to Remember

“Yep, you’re pregnant”
That’s not the usual way a doctor would inform a happily married couple with the news that they are expecting a baby. No congratulations. No warm smile. That’s because our situation is different, not by choice, by fate.
It was no surprise to me that I was pregnant though. Over 1 week late (and I have never been late for anything in my life) followed by morning sickness 3 days in a row. It doesn’t take a rocket science to figure that one out.

Leukaemia, terminal, treatments. The three words that I can’t escape and are forced to live with everyday. I have accepted it though and so has Landon. Instead of dwelling on the fact that my life is coming to an end before it’s barely started, we focus on making the most of the time I have left. A baby was definitely not part of the plan and from the doctors tone of voice, It’s obvious he’s no bearer of good news.
“As you know, we can not carry on treating your Leukaemia with Chemotherapy if you are pregnant, especially since you have reached a terminal stage in your illness.”
The Doctor just reminded me of those three painful words all in one sentence. Leukaemia, terminal, treatments.

The doctor broke the silence, “I know this is a huge decision to make, but please take a couple of days to think about it and then get back to me, the sooner the better”. I don’t know how but I managed to pick myself up and walk out of the doctor’s office. Luckily Landon came with me today because there’s no way I could have been able to drive. The ride home was painfully silent, both me and Landon were too scared to say a word. I was trying to let the feeling sink in but how was I meant to with an ultimatum like this..

If I choose to keep the baby, I have to stop my chemotherapy and chances are I will only be around for a few months of the baby’s life OR if I choose to terminate the baby, I can carry on with my treatments and live a normal life for another strong 5 years. And to think only a few hours ago, picking which dress to wear to the doctors was my hardest decision for the day.

We couldn’t avoid the topic all day so it was me who finally broke.
“Landon, say something”
“There’s no way I’m letting you give up 5 years of your life, this baby won’t be fair on either of us.” He replied.
He couldn’t be serious.
I can’t kill a baby just so I can live an extra 5 years, this baby would be like my replacement. Every cloud has a silver lining they say.
“I’m going to die anyway” I’m stabbed back at him
“Do you really want this baby to grow up without a mother? As sinful as it may sound, but in the future I could not look this baby in the eye without the reminder that they are the reason you were taken from me, I’m sorry, but it wouldn’t be fair to bring a baby into this world with circumstances like that.”
With that, I stormed out of the house and made my way to the place that knows me better than I know myself, church.
It was empty like I hoped it would be. It didn’t take long for the pastor to come and sit next to me, he knew something wasn’t right. He was only here to help so I told him about the doctor’s visit this morning, I was desperate for any advice. Well storming out of the house and coming here turned out to be the right thing to do. The pastor assured me I wasn’t the first person he had come across in my situation and that there were others out there suffering the same as me. He explained to me there have been unlucky cases like mine where the patient decides to terminate the baby, and they then suddenly pass away months later. There have also been happy endings where the patient decides to risk it and keep the baby, and the mother is still living to tell the story.
“You really have to leave it up to fate and trust it will do it’s job. It’s impossible to know what the right decision is right now, have faith.” The pastor left it at that as he got up and walked back to the stand. He was right, I just needed to trust fate. I’m going to have this baby and I’m going to live I thought to myself. My heart suddenly dropped, how was I ever going to convince Landon, he had a good point that bringing this baby up would be unfair. He would never listen to me. I dragged myself out of my seat and started to head out the door when right there, just 5 rows behind me, was Landon. He had followed me down here and heard everything the pastor said. He looked me in the eye and I knew he was on my side now. Now all I can do is leave it in the hands of fate.

Saturday, August 14, 2010

Fan fiction(final)

(Preview: Chuck and Blair broke up because Chuck and Jenny, who Blair does not like, had slept together. In fact, Chuck was going to propose to Blair with a gorgeous ring. Then Blair and Serena (Blair’s best friend) left to Paris, Chuck was robbed and the robbers gave him a shot because Chuck was trying to stop them from robbing his ring.)
After the two robbers shot Chuck and rubbed the ring which he was going to proposed to Blair, they run off. Chuck was lying down on the freezing, hard ground, and bleeding. He said Blair’s name, quietly. A few minutes later, Nate-Chuck Bass’ best friend came. He saw Chuck was shot and called 911 immediately.
Half an hour later, many people have arrived to the hospital. Lily’s mother Cece, her daughter Eric and her husband Rufus were the earliest. They were at the reception doing the paper work and paying for the operation as Dan and Vanessa, who are also friends with Chuck came.
“How is he?” Dan was worried.
“I don’t know. The doctor is still in the operation room. But luckily, he said Chuck didn’t lose much blood. So he should be fine.” Rufus explained.
“Oh poor kid. He has lost his father, his mother betrayed him, and the only person he cares about the most, Blair is gone. Now someone just gave him a bullet! How miserable could he be!” Lily said with tears.
“Don’t worry, he will be fine.” Cece gave her a hug, tries to comfort her daughter.
Everyone fell into silence. They are waiting, hoping Chuck would be fine.
Another half an hour later, the operation light is off. Lily and Rufus walked to the door as quick as they can, waiting for Chuck and the doctor. Thirty seconds later, Chuck was out. He was lying in the bed. His eyes were closed, tightly, but a name came out of his mouth: “Blair.”
Everybody was looking at each others; they did not know what to say. The doctor’s coming broke the silence.
“Doctor, how is he?”
“Mr. Bass is fine now, but he needs rest. He should be staying in the hospital and we will do several checks to make sure that his body is fine.”
“Thank god!” said Lily.
“And one more thing, this is maybe none of my business, but seems like the Blair girl is really important to him, if you can make her come, that will be very helpful for him.” After finishing this, the doctor left.
Silence, again.
“Well, I’m going to check on Chuck.” Vanessa broke the silence. Then she left with Rufus and Dan. Eric followed them.
“So, what do you think?” Lily turned around to her mother.
“About what?”
“What else could it be? Should we tell Serena and Blair?”
“Oh, I didn’t aspect that you will give a chance to give opinions from your poor mum.” Cece was joking.
“Mum.” Lily stared at her, arms around her chest.
“OK. I think that…”
Cece didn’t have a chance to finish her statement, because Nate interrupted.
“Excuse me, Lily and Cece. Sorry about my interruption. May I have a sentence?”
“Oh Nate! I haven’t seen you since I got here. Where were you?”
“I was at the back f the hospital, thinking about whether we should tell Serena and Blair about it.”
“Well then, tell us your answer, should we or not?” Cece looked at him, asked with a big interest.
“I don’t think we should tell the girls about Chuck. They were hurt, I mean Blair, and she was hurt by Chuck and Jenny, and now that Blair’s gone, she’s obviously trying to leak the wound by herself. So maybe we should give her some time, let her be alone, when she’s ready to come back, I think maybe that is the time we tell her what had happened to Chuck.”
Cece looked at him and smiled, she tapped Nate’s shoulder for a few times. Then she said: “Nate, I can understand what you are worrying about, but the fact is, the truth never sleeps. Besides, Blair has the right to know. I think we all know, although Blair said there are over, she still loves Chuck very much, doesn’t she?”
Nate didn’t say anything.
Cece dialed Serena’s number in Paris.
“Bonjour! Hello Grandma!” It sounds like Serena’s very happy right now.
“Hello my dear Serena. How are you two in France?”
“We are fine. What made you want to call me?”
“Well, to be honest, I have a very bad news.”
“What is it?”
“I’m not sure if you should tell Blair about this, but you can make the decision. Chuck was shot.”
“What?!!” Serena changed he tongs immediately.
“Yes, in order to protect the ring he was going to propose to Blair.”
“Grandma, are you serious? I mean this is not funny.”
“Serena dear, do you really think I am willing to give you an overseas call just to tell you this matter which is not funny at all?”
“OK, I know that now. What…what should I do??”
“Telling Blair, or not, is up to you. I just think you should have the right to know. You are still his family after all, you know.”

Hudson, Jenny’s mum’s house
“What?? Chuck was shot?!”
“Yeah, he’s still in the hospital now, but the doctor said he will be fine.”
Jenny was in her room, she was skyping Eric now.
When Jenny first heard that Chuck was shot, especially for that ridiculous proposal ring, she thought Chuck was crazy, but when she calm down, she found that what Chuck had done, was reasonable.
Chuck loves Blair and Blair loves Chuck, it sounds so natural. They are born for each other. Especially when Chuck’s dad and mum were both gone, the only person left behind was Blair. Only now, Blair had left him, would Blair forgive him? Jenny doubts that.
Jenny remembers that night, the night Blair came to Chuck’s house and told him that she’ll accept him; the night Chuck was going to propose to Blair; the night everybody thought that Chuck and Jenny had slept together.
They actually did nothing. They were lying beside each other for a while, and then Jenny got up, seating on the bed. After a while, so did chuck.
That’s how they slept together, that’s what they did, for “I don’t wanna be alone”.

Fan fintion Draft

After the too robbers shot Chuck and rubbed the ring which he was going to proposed to Blair, they run off. Chuck was lying down on the freezing, hard ground, and bleeding. He said Blair’s name, quietly. A few minutes later, Nate came. He saw Chuck was shot and called 911 immediately.
Half an hour later, many people have arrived to the hospital. Lily’s mother Cici, Eric and Rufus were the earliest. They were at the reception doing the paper work and paying for the operation as Dan and Vanessa came.
“How is he?” Dan was worried.
“I don’t know. The doctor is still in the operation room. But luckily, he said Chuck didn’t lose much blood. So he should be fine.” Rufus explained.
“Oh poor kid. He has lost his father, his mother betrayed him, and the only person he cares about the most, Blair is gone. Now someone just gave him a bullet! How miserable could he be!” Lily said with tears.
“Don’t worry, he will be fine.” Cici gave her a hug, tries to comfort her daughter.
Everyone fell into silence. They are waiting, hoping Chuck would be fine.
Another half an hour later, the operation light is off. Lily and Rufus walked to the door as quick as they can, waiting for Chuck and the doctor. Thirty seconds later, Chuck was out. He was lying in the bed. His eyes were closed, tightly, but a name kept coming out of his mouth: “Blair… Blair…”
Everybody was looking at each others; they did not know what to say. The doctor’s coming broke the silence.
“Doctor, how is he?”
“Mr. Bass is fine now, but he needs rest. He should be staying in the hospital and we will do several checks to make sure that his body is fine.”
“Thank god!” said Lily.
“But from what I see, I think there is one more thing he also needs, which is a girl called Blair. He kept repeating her name. If you can get this girl, it will be much helpful for his recovery.” After finishing this, the doctor left.
Silence, again.
“Well, I’m going to check on Chuck.” Vanessa broke the silence. Then she left with Rufus and Dan. Eric followed them.
“So, what do you think?” Lily turned around to her mother.
“About what?”
“What else could it be? Should we tell Serena and Blair?”
“Oh, I didn’t aspect that you will give a chance to give opinions from your poor mum.”
“Mum.” Lily stared at her, her arms around her chest.
“OK. I think that…”
Cici didn’t have a chance to finish her statement, because Nate interrupted.
“Excuse me, Lily and Cici. Sorry about my interruption. May I have a sentence?”
“Oh Nate! I haven’t seen you since I got here. Where were you?”
“I was at the back f the hospital, thinking about whether we should tell Serena and Blair about it.”
“Well then, tell us your answer, should we or not?” Cici looked at him, asked with a big interest.
“I don’t think we should tell the girls about Chuck. They were hurt, I mean Blair,” Nate corrected his mistake, it seems like he did not want to remind himself that Serena and him have broke up. “Blair was hurt by Chuck and Jenny, now that Blair’s gone, she’s obviously trying to leak the wound by herself. So maybe we should give her some time, let her be alone, when she’s ready to come back, I think maybe that is the time we tell her that Chuck was shot, and more importantly, Chuck would be fine at the time.”
Cici looked at him and smiled, she tapped Nate’s shoulder for a few times. Then she said: “Nate, I can understand what you are worrying about, but the fact is, the truth never sleeps. Besides, Blair has the right to know. I think we all know, although Blair said there are over, she still loves Chuck very much, doesn’t she?”
Nate didn’t say anything.
Hudson, Jenny’s mum’s house
“What?? Chuck is hurt?!”
“Yeah, he’s still in the hospital now, but the doctor said he will be fine.”
Jenny was in her room, she was skyping Eric now.
When Jenny first heard that Chuck was shot, especially for that ridiculous proposal ring, she thought Chuck was crazy, but when she calm down, she found that what Chuck had done, was reasonable.
Chuck loves Blair and Blair loves Chuck, it sounds so natural. They are born for each other. Especially when Chuck’s dad and mum both gone, the only person left behind was Blair. Only now, Blair had left him, would Blair forgive him? Jenny doubts that.
Jenny was recalling that night, the night Blair came to Chuck’s house and told him that she’ll accept him; the night Chuck was going to propose to Blair; the night everybody thought that Chuck and Jenny had slept together.
They actually did nothing. They were lying beside each other for a while, and then Jenny got up, seating on the bed. After a while, so did chuck.
That’s how they slept together, that’s what they did, for “I don’t wanna be alone”.

Ten summaries

Friday, August 13, 2010

10 Fan Fiction Reviews

Alice in Wonderland.
1. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6229696/1/The_Heir_To_The_Throne
The kingdom of underland will disappear. Everyone is panicky. A witch told them if they find the daughter of red queen, the underland will be safe. She is named Rose and lives in the flower forest. So they began their way to find the heir Rose. But when they found Rose, she didn’t want to be the heir; she just wants to have the peaceful life. In the end, hatter changed her mind, and she becomes the heir of underland. Underland was safe!
2. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5988823/1/But_Now_Youre_Back
Alice always dreamed strong thing. Hatter missed Alice very much. Alice decided to find the thing in her dream, and lost in the sea. Luckily, hatter found her, his lovely Alice. They lived a happy life in underland. But Alice still thought she should come back to her world. Finally, with the help of rabbit, Alice stayed in the underland.
3. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6213483/1/The_Perfect_Kiss
This fan fiction is a poem which said the love of Alice and hatter. After seeing the movie, most people want they two become a couple. This is just the wish of them. This poem is very short, but it clearly shows the love between them.

4. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6212606/1/I_Am_Not_Dead
Alice can not stand the life she lives. She wanted to find a place which has something wonders. In the school, everything stops her to explore the new thing. She was dead; she saw her corpse and graveyard. She cried and become crazy. At the time she thought she would die, one warm voice notices her. That is a dream. Hatter looked at her with all his love, Alice laughed.

5. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6009316/5/Red_Queens_Escape
Red queen escaped from the dungeon!! This is a big new in underland. Obviously, the red queen is clever, she found a fake red queen in the dungeon, and escaped there successfully. She wanted to be the majesty of underland again.
White queen found red queen escaping the dungeon, she realize the underland will have a disaster. She needed to stop it!
Red queen came back to her castle. To her surprise, the entire thing in the castle become white, even her lovely horse. She got crazy and asked them to paint it red. Actually in red queen’s heart, she is lonely.

6. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6232912/1/Tea_Time
This fan fiction describes the talking in the tea time. All the friend got together and talked about the thing happened in them. Finally, they remained Alice; they all missed her very much. The one missed Alice most is of course hatter, because he loved Alice.

7. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6232326/1/Memories
This fan fiction is the scene just before the Alice’s mother died. Only at that time, Helen found that she should give Alice a dreamed space, all she did on Alice is just because she loved her. And Alice understood what her mother’s mind. Even Alice’s mother died, she lived in another world. In that world, she saw their father, and they went on their happiness life. The two daughters in another world also can felt the happiness air around them.

8. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6108405/1/More_than_Alice
Alice become a successful trader, but still thought something lost in her deep heart. One day, she saw the rabbit again. He told her hatter is sick, he wanted to see Alice. So after 10 years she left wonderland, Alice come back again. She saw sick hatter, and looked after him. Finally she found what she wanted in the 10 years- lifetime, longing, and love.

9. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6087820/1/Talking_to_the_Moon
This fan fiction is an interesting way to rewrite the story. Like a dialogue between Alice and hatter. They all missed each other and they used the moon be tool to send their message. From the words in their heart, we can see the deeply love in their mind.

10. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5983226/1/The_White_Queen
In the mind of the writer, the white queen is not a good queen in underland. All the white color here is fake, And the white queen become a snobby twirl. This is an adventurous try.

Wednesday, August 11, 2010

The Truman Show




Felicity

Christof may have controlled the first thirty years of my life, but I wasn’t going to let him dictate my future. Not many people can say that their entire life was a lie. Not many people can say that they’ve never met anyone real, only actors. How would you feel knowing that your wife was fed the line “I love you”? It’s hard to fathom I know but that was my existence. Ever since my escape from Seahaven, I’ve been living a re-birth of sorts. It’s remarkable knowing that every decision I had ever made up until this point was manipulated. Everything from the sweater I wore, down to the spoon in my cereal had been chosen for me. The rain drops that I assumed were falling from the sky were merely water vents designed to create the illusion of an element. It was all fake.

There was however an exception in the form of Sylvia. From the moment I met her I knew she was the one. My marriage to Meryl was nothing but a sham. Christof tried to make me love her from the start and for a while the manipulation worked. It’s easy to fabricate feelings when you’re desperate to feel something, but how could I trust someone who favoured Febreze over my ambitions? I wanted to see the world and Meryl wanted to see the mall. There was nothing spontaneous about her and in time I knew that I could never truly love her. The day I slipped on the sidewalk was the day that changed everything. She was the only one who stopped to see if I was okay. I remember thinking that there was something not quite right about that. The rest of the street just walked on by like robots. She didn’t have to stop you know I was quite capable of helping myself; but she did. There was something genuine about her face that day and I knew I had to see her again.





Two weeks went by until I saw her again. She was standing outside the bakery across the road, so I jumped at the chance to talk to her. I wouldn’t normally go to this bakery but I was tiring of my usual routine and thought what the hell; I was allowed to be friendly right? Wrong. My attempts to connect with her were squashed by Christof and she was immediately removed from the show. It took five steps in her direction before a sudden car crash made it impossible to get to her. At the time this seemed unbelievable, but now I can actually laugh about it. How I stayed so ignorant all those years is beyond me. As soon as I escaped from Seahaven, Sylvia was there waiting for me outside of the studio gates. Apparently once she left the show she started protesting for my release and was thereby banned from the premises. I couldn’t believe it once I found out. On top of everything there were people out there who wanted me to be free and Christof did everything in his power to try and shut them up. I even heard rumours of death threats. Many people thought I would seek revenge upon my release but what would that achieve? The biggest bitch is karma I say so let her do her job.

Sylvia and I chose to put the past behind us months ago and have never been happier. We already have a baby together called Felicity who is the light of our lives. She looks just like her mother but has the spirit of her father and is constantly looking for new places to explore. I don’t know what I’d do if any harm came to her. Not many people know this but upon my release from the show I received a letter from Christof stating that when the time is right my first child will suffer the same fate I did. I’d never want this information released however as all we want is to live a normal life with the same level of privacy as anyone else. I know it will never happen but I have to try my best for Felicity’s sake. Imagine the media frenzy if the press got a hold of the letter? He is so bitter about the demise of his show that he is determined to start afresh, his dream of course being Felicity to play the star.




What he meant by “when the time the time is right” I will never know but due to the nature of the situation (and my paranoia) I have Felicity under constant surveillance. I don’t know what drives me crazier, the fact that my child is under the same scrutiny that I once was, or that somebody could be so obsessed with reality television that they would risk everything to get what they want. By everything I mean his very life. I swore to myself that if Christof ever came near my children he would be a dead man. It would be a quest to say the least as he’s locked up these days, but I truly believe that there are no boundaries with that man and he will stop at nothing to get what he wants. I should check on Felicity actually, she’s been quiet over the monitor for a while now and I promised Sylvia that we would do something special as a family tonight. It is after all, a year since my escape…